Saturday 6 June 2015

LO5: Reflection On feedback

After our meeting with Vicky Kilby we received a few things our team need to improve.

You can tell who our target audience is by our script, it relates to the lifestyle by mentioning conventions such as EGX. The script shows that it is more aimed at males by mentioning games with an action genre which is stereotypically something a boy would more interested in. The age of the target audience are teenage boys, so (13-19). The script for the Games Corner shows that it is aimed at local people because it is on Sheffield Live so it is Yorkshire based.

*More information needed to be included from a larger variety of games releases.
*Research for local gaming events as well as development and tech.

We will improve our script by following these two points, which should lengthen the script and include more relevant information which will interest the audience.

We were succcesful in:

*Following the genre in the script.
*Script was written well and shared well between both presenters.
*The language and form in the script was understandable for the target audience.
*We had an upbeat tone.

1. In this unit we created a 5 minute TV News Broadcast script which is created to be broacasted on to Sheffield Live! The show is named The Games Corner and the target audience are people who play a lot of games and have an interest in finding out about new game releases and reviews. The Games Corner has a NRS social grade of C1, D & Eno most of the viewers don't have a large income. The script refers to the target audience as it talks about mainstream games that are inexpensive.

2. Vicky mentioned that our script contained relativity good information but felt like we didn't go in to much depth on some topics. She agreed with our form and style and said we spread everything out fairly but our script was more international than just targeted at people from Sheffield. We now have to do research on local gaming events and conventions which we shall include into the script. This is important as Vicky has experience and knows how to make it look professional and up to standards.

3.We need to make minor changes to our TV News Broadcast and make it more local and more in depth. We will talk more about game play and new releases. We also need to add more camera directions in order to make it more descriptive. This will make our script up to standards and more professional, as well as helping us conect to the target audience.

4.Our content and layout meets the conventions of a TV News Broadcast. Vicky says how the script follows all the conventions and told us how nicely we had presented the script. Our language was informal as we aimed for presenters to be relaxed and be themselves, this will help connect with the young audience. We were still very informative and followed conventions. The house style used follows the conventions as it was written in the font Courier size 12. This makes it clear to follow and all the team can follow this script. When writing our script we ensured that  it follows the typical conventions of a script with the location, GFX and SFX on the right hand side, the dialogue in the centre and the camera actions on the left hand side. The mode of address we used was both peer to peer and teacher to pupil so it can both be informative but with a relaxed nature. Nothing has been missed out on the script be we need to work on being more specific.
This will help the script be more descriptive to both the presenters, the camera team and the editing team. 

5. Ofcom Broadcasting codes shows that our script is appropriate for children under 18. The show is broadcasted mid day so must be pre- watershed. This means offensive language, sexual, drugs or violent refrences can not be included. Our script is free from any of these and follows the Ofcom code. Because of this we have not mentioned any games that are aged 18. All legal and ethical issues have been considered. We don't want to be portraying anything inappropriate to the audience, so we have abided the Ofcom codes. We would receive copyright for both music and graphics by asking for permission to use and credit in our show. We do this in order for us not getting sued. We will ensure that all information is not libel which means false information. We would have to source our information and official websites, this is very important to ensure no information given is false.










 

  












Wednesday 3 June 2015

LO4: Amended Script

All of the highlighted sections are where we have taken on board Vicky's comments and made changes to our script. This includes things such as change of dialogue and new features.



THE GAMES CORNER
NEWS SECTION – EPISODE 4
16/03/15 – 20/02/15
CREATED BY
MOLLY KEYWORTH
SOPHIE BIRKS
ANNABEL SLATER
AIR TIME: 13:00PM
LOCATION: THE GAMES CORNER STUDIO, SHEFFIELD
DESCRIPTON: SOFA X2, TV, ROUND TABLE, MAGAZINES AND POSTER BACKGROUND.
1.int.STUDIO.N.I. FADE UP OF
GFX – NEWS SECTION LOGO
sfx – NEWS CORNER intro SOUND
INRODUCTION                     
                          
CUT TO LEVEL SHOT
VICKY
You’re now watching the News Corner. Here’s what’s been going on…
                                                                          CUT to LEVEL SHOT
JORDAN
This week, we’ve had over 15 new releases across all different platforms.
              CUT TO LEVEL WIDE SHOT
VICKY
From family favourites to carnage classics, these releases are not to be missed!
Also this week tickets were released for EGX 2015 at the NEC In Birmingham
CUT TO EXISTING FOOTAGE OF EGX 2014
JORDAN (V.O, SILENT)
Yep, the wait is finally over!  The annual video gaming convention presented by Eurogamer, EGX 2015 tickets are now on sale.  The convention is on the 24th-27th September held at the NEC in Birmingham.
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
Tickets are priced at £17.50 for a day pass, £20 for an early entry ticket and only £60 for a 4 day entry pass.  This convention is one of the most popular conventions in the UK, meaning tickets will be flying out.
CUT BACK TO STUDIO
LEVEL SHOT OF JORDAN
JORDAN
Tickets can be purchased from the EGX website.  We know we’ll be definitely buying.
        2.int.STUDIO.N.I. FADE UP OF
GFX – THE GAMES CORNER LOGO
                                               LEVEL SHOT OF VICKY
Vicky
On Tuesday, The MGSC Asia (Mobile Gaming and Social Casino) Conference was held.
                               CUT TO FOOTAGE OF MGSC ASIA
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
Over two days, with an exhibition where over 100 of Asia’s leading gaming, social gaming and online gaming experts gathered.
         CUT BACK TO STUDIO
LEVEL SHOT
JORDAN
In other news, the annual spring event ENADA was held on the 18th-20th at the Expo Centre in Italy. Attended by 25,208 visitors in 2014, confirms its leading Expo for the gaming trade and it represents and important economic driving force for the entire gaming sector.                                                                                  CUT TO LEVEL SHOT
                        VICKY
As well as international and national events, there has also been a local gaming event in Sheffield! The Game Republic Network Event was held at the Showroom this Wednesday.       
       CUT TO LEVEL SHOT 
JORDAN
The industry-led professional games network included companies such as Rockstar and Sumo Digital.  This is now a monthly event held on the 3rd Wednesday of every month at 4pm which, features ambassadors from companies such as Microsoft and Sony. For more information visit www.GameRepublic.net
3.int.STUDIO.N.I. FADE UP OF
GFX – THE GAMES CORNER LOGO
                            LEVEL MEDIUM SHOT
                      GFX – SPONGEBOB HEROPANTS GAME            COVER ON SCREEN BEHIND
VICKY
And now back to this weeks new releases. SpongeBob HeroPants was released by Activision this week, available on Nintendo 3DS, PlayStation Vita and Xbox 360. It is an action-adventure game which follows SpongeBob’s hometown of Bikini Bottom being invaded and it is left upon SpongeBob to save it!  With the chance to play as other characters, this game has been rated 3.1 out of 5 by the reviewers at Metacritic.com
               CUT TO BATTLEFIELD FOOTAGE
Tuesday saw the release of Battlefield Hardline across platforms such as PS3 and 4, Xbox 360 and Xbox One.
cut to BRIEF PLAY footage of each game
JORDAN (V.O, SILENT)
Also released across the Playstation platforms this week were Bladestorm: Nightmare, Final Fantasy, JamesTown+ and Tales from the Borderlands: Episode 2.
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
Resident Evil released Revelations 2 – Episode 4 over Tuesday and Wednesday for multiple platforms such as Playstation, Xbox and Win.
JORDAN(V.O, SILENT)
The ultimate family party game was also released this week! Mario Party 10 available only on WiiU stormed the charts, keeping up with Nintendo's epic reputations of family fun.
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
However, the Nintendo DS had a slow week releasing only                                                                                                             Fossil Fighters: Frontier on Friday for the 3DS.
JORDAN (V.O, SILENT)
The proposed game of the month Slender: The            Arrival launched this week for PS3, 4, Xbox 360 and  One.  The survival horror game, which was developed by Blue Isle Studios hit the shelves along with ranking up the gaming charts.
                                    CUT back TO STUDIO
                                      LEVEL MEDIUM CLOSE UP SHOT
VICKY
That’s it for this week!  Be sure to check out next weeks gaming news.
  CUT TO OUTRO
GFX – THE GAMES CORNER NEWS SECTION OUTRO
SFX – OUTRO MUSIC
END.

Wednesday 6 May 2015

LO4: The Games Corner Script Feedback.

Due to illness i was not able to attend this meeting, but this is the information i received from the other members of the team.

The 5 questions were...


1. Do you think that our script follows the correct genre of The Games Corner? Why?
2. When researching our week, it seemed to be very slow for news - Do you think that this shows or is there enough content for a substantial news section?
3. Do you think that the dialogue is shared between you and Jordan well or is it too one sided?
4.  Does the language and form used in the script make it understandable for your target audience? Why?
5.  What would you change about our script?


Evidence of meeting.







LO4: feedback

Thursday 23 April 2015

LO3:Links we used for reference material.

List of game releases in March available at  http://www.playstationlifestyle.net/march-2015-ps4-ps3-ps-vita-new-release-video-games/
Sourced on 23/3/15

Spongebob HeroPants game information available at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SpongeBob_HeroPants and http://www.metacritic.com/game/xbox-360/spongebob-heropants both sourced on 23/3/15 

Slender Man The Arrival game information available at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slender:_The_Arrival Sourced on the 23/3/15

Information for the Gaming Republic Networking event is available at http://gamerepublic.net Sourced on 23/3/15


LO3: Games Corner Draft Scripts.





THE GAMES CORNER
NEWS SECTION – EPISODE 4
16/03/15 – 20/02/15
CREATED BY
MOLLY KEYWORTH
SOPHIE BIRKS
ANNABEL SLATER
AIR TIME: 13:00PM
LOCATION: THE GAMES CORNER STUDIO, SHEFFIELD
DESCRIPTION: SOFA X2, TV, ROUND TABLE, MAGAZINES AND POSTER BACKGROUND.
1.INT.STUDIO.N.I. FADE UP OF
GFX – NEWS SECTION LOGO
SFX – NEWS CORNER intro SOUND
INTRODUCTION                      
                              cut to level shot
VICKY
You’re now watching the News Corner. Here’s what’s been going on…
                                                                          CUT to LEVEL SHOT
JORDAN
This week, we’ve had over 15 new releases across all different platforms.
              CUT TO LEVEL WIDE SHOT
VICKY
From family favourites to carnage classics, these releases are not to be missed!
Also this week tickets were released for EGX 2015 at the NEC In Birmingham
CUT TO EXISTING FOOTAGE OF EGX 2014
JORDAN (V.O, SILENT)
Yep, the wait is finally over!  The annual video gaming convention presented by Eurogamer, EGX 2015 tickets are now on sale.  The convention is on the 24th-27th September held at the NEC in Birmingham.
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
Tickets are priced at £17.50 for a day pass, £20 for an early entry ticket and only £60 for a 4 day entry pass.  This convention is one of the most popular conventions in the UK, meaning tickets will be flying out.
CUT BACK TO STUDIO
LEVEL SHOT OF JORDAN
JORDAN
Tickets can be purchased from the EGX website.  We know we’ll be definitely buying.
        2.int.STUDIO.N.I. FADE UP OF
GFX – NEWS SECTION LOGO
                                               LEVEL SHOT OF VICKY
VICKY
On Tuesday, The MGSC Asia (Mobile Gaming and Social Casino) Conference was held.
                               CUT TO FOOTAGE OF MGSC ASIA
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
Over two days, with an exhibition where over 100 of Asia’s leading gaming, social gaming and online gaming experts gathered.
         CUT BACK TO STUDIO
LEVEL SHOT
JORDAN
In other news, the annual spring event ENADA was held on the 18th-20th at the Expo Centre in Italy. Attended by 25,208 visitors in 2014, confirms its leading Expo for the gaming trade and it represents and important economic driving force for the entire gaming sector.
VICKY
And now back to this weeks new releases.
               CUT TO BATTLEFIELD FOOTAGE
Tuesday saw the release of Battlefield Hardline across platforms such as PS3 and 4, Xbox 360 and Xbox One.
cut to BRIEF PLAY footage of each game
JORDAN (V.O, SILENT)
Also released across the Playstation platforms this week was Bladestorm: Nightmare, Final Fantasy, JamesTown+ and Tales from the Borderlands: Episode 2.
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
Resident Evil released Revelations 2 – Episode 4 over Tuesday and Wednesday for multiple platforms such as Playstation, Xbox and Win.
JORDAN (V.O, SILENT)
The ultimate family party game was also released this week! Mario Party 10 available only on WiiU stormed the charts, keeping up with Nintendo's epic reputations of family fun.
VICKY (V.O, SILENT)
However, the Nintendo DS had a slow week releasing only                                                                                                             Fossil Fighters: Frontier on Friday for the 3DS.
                                    CUT back TO STUDIO
                                      LEVEL MEDIUM CLOSE UP SHOT
JORDAN
That’s it for this week!  Be sure to check out next weeks gaming news.
  CUT TO OUTRO
GFX – THE GAMES CORNER NEWS SECTION OUTRO
SFX – OUTRO MUSIC
END.